What belongs in the opening of a long essay?
- The question plus the route you will take
- General filler while you warm up
- Fine detail from one late section
How many jobs should one section of your essay have?
- As many as fit on the page
- Two, to keep the essay short
- One. A section doing two gets split
A good transition closes one point and points to the next.
Circle one: True False
Readers will likely lose the thread halfway through your longest section. What helps most?
- A sentence linking that part back to the question
- A longer word in nearly every sentence
- Removing the section heading for flow
Your outline gives one section two jobs: background and verdict. What do you do?
- Leave it. Strong sections can multitask.
- Split it into two sections and update the outline.
- Delete both jobs and start the essay over.
Once you pick a shape for your essay, you should keep changing it to surprise the reader.
Circle one: True False
Every paragraph proves its point, yet readers feel lost between sections. What is missing?
- Longer paragraphs with more proof
- Bigger words for a stronger voice
- Sentences that close one section while naming the next
A section is beautifully written but answers a different question. What do you do?
- Keep it. Fine writing is never wasted.
- Move it where it fits, or cut it.
- Change your whole question to match it.