What makes a strong opening?
- A history of the town
- A list of every character
- A voice, a problem, or a strange detail
What shape fits a short story?
- One turning point, kept whole
- Three plots told thinly
- A full novel squeezed in
Ending on an image beats a paragraph that explains the meaning.
Circle one: True False
A story follows five subplots in one page. What should go?
- Every scene that does not serve the single turn
- The dialogue between characters
- The turning point itself
A draft opens with waking up and a long description. What is the fix?
- Add more description first
- Cut forward to the first interesting moment
- Explain the meaning earlier
Dialogue and concrete detail carry more weight than piles of adjectives.
Circle one: True False
Two openings: one lists family history, one drops into an argument. Which wins?
- The history, since readers need facts
- The argument, with the past leaking in later
- Neither, since stories need calm starts
A story ends by stating what the events taught the hero. What is wrong?
- The sentence is too short
- The dialogue needs more tags
- The ending explains instead of landing the feeling