Free indirect passages still use he, she and they. What does that show?
- the narration stays third person while borrowing the character mind
- the character narrates aloud
- pronouns prove full distance
The line reads the room felt cold, with no he thought tag. What is this?
- a printing error
- narrator and character voices blended in one sentence
- a change of narrator
In close third person, the writer may zoom from wide neutral telling to a tight stray thought.
Circle one: True False
A passage opens on the town square at dusk, then gives her raw unmarked verdict on the crowd. Where did distance move?
- it stayed wide throughout
- it pulled from wide description into tight character thought
- it left third person
A plain report sentence contains the word idiot for a neighbour. Whose judgement is it?
- the neutral narrator fact
- the neighbour himself
- the followed character, since no outsider would state it flatly
Two claims share a sentence: the street was empty and nobody decent was out. How do you split them?
- both are narrator facts
- both belong to the crowd
- the empty street reads as report, decent reads as her judgement
What does the blur do to the reader at the slipped-in verdict?
- it pushes the reader inside her view before any warning arrives
- it tells the reader to distrust every narrator
- it shortens the novel
A student insists every sentence is either pure narrator or pure character. A sentence carries both. What is the correction?
- pick one voice and ignore the other
- admit the blur: the sentence does its work by carrying both at once
- blame the translation