"He would miss the train. Why did this always happen to him?" In this free indirect passage, which feature retains third-person grammar?
The scene follows Ada, who resents waiting: "She checked the clock. Another hour wasted on these fools." What best describes the final sentence?
Third-person narration can move from a broad description toward a character's immediate thoughts without changing narrator.
Circle one: True False
"At dusk, the square emptied. Lila gripped her application. Another rejection tomorrow, no doubt." The scene follows anxious Lila. How does narrative distance change?
Ivo earlier called his neighbor "that fool." A scene follows Ivo: "Another visit from that fool. Hadn't he suffered enough?" Whose judgement do these clues support?
After Liv complains about her neighbors, the narration says, "The street was empty. All the decent people had gone." Which distinction is supported?
Sera waits for her brother's train. He has not arrived. The scene follows her: "Of course he forgot her. Nobody cared." Later, she learns his train was delayed. What can the untagged judgement do?
A student says every free indirect sentence must belong entirely to either narrator or character. Which correction fits?