Free Indirect Style and Narrative Distance · seed 1 · A4, ink-friendly. The answer key prints on its own page for grown-ups.

Whose thought is in this sentence

English · Reading Comprehension · ages 16-18
Name ______________________   Date ____________
  1. Free indirect passages still use he, she and they. What does that show?

    • the narration stays third person while borrowing the character mind
    • the character narrates aloud
    • pronouns prove full distance
  2. The line reads the room felt cold, with no he thought tag. What is this?

    • a printing error
    • narrator and character voices blended in one sentence
    • a change of narrator
  3. In close third person, the writer may zoom from wide neutral telling to a tight stray thought.

    Circle one:   True   False

  4. A passage opens on the town square at dusk, then gives her raw unmarked verdict on the crowd. Where did distance move?

    • it stayed wide throughout
    • it pulled from wide description into tight character thought
    • it left third person
  5. A plain report sentence contains the word idiot for a neighbour. Whose judgement is it?

    • the neutral narrator fact
    • the neighbour himself
    • the followed character, since no outsider would state it flatly
  6. Two claims share a sentence: the street was empty and nobody decent was out. How do you split them?

    • both are narrator facts
    • both belong to the crowd
    • the empty street reads as report, decent reads as her judgement
  7. What does the blur do to the reader at the slipped-in verdict?

    • it pushes the reader inside her view before any warning arrives
    • it tells the reader to distrust every narrator
    • it shortens the novel
  8. A student insists every sentence is either pure narrator or pure character. A sentence carries both. What is the correction?

    • pick one voice and ignore the other
    • admit the blur: the sentence does its work by carrying both at once
    • blame the translation
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Whose thought is in this sentence W1-mt_r3DLUmwC6G-s1

  1. the narration stays third person while borrowing the character mind · Third person grammar remains, but the wording turns into the character voice.
  2. narrator and character voices blended in one sentence · The feeling slides into the sentence with nothing marking whose it is.
  3. True · Distance is a moving choice, not a fixed setting.
  4. it pulled from wide description into tight character thought · Neutral panorama first, then a zoom so close the thought slips out untagged.
  5. the followed character, since no outsider would state it flatly · Loaded words no neutral voice would choose mark the slip into character mind.
  6. the empty street reads as report, decent reads as her judgement · Decent carries a verdict no neutral counter could verify, so it sits with her.
  7. it pushes the reader inside her view before any warning arrives · Unmarked thought lands as story world, so her slant steers sympathy quietly.
  8. admit the blur: the sentence does its work by carrying both at once · Undecidable ownership is the device, not a flaw in the reading.
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