Free Indirect Style and Narrative Distance · seed 1 · A4, ink-friendly. The answer key prints on its own page for grown-ups.

Whose thought is in this sentence?

English · Reading Comprehension · ages 16-18
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  1. "He would miss the train. Why did this always happen to him?" In this free indirect passage, which feature retains third-person grammar?

    • The pronouns he and him
    • The question about the delay
    • The absence of a thought tag
  2. The scene follows Ada, who resents waiting: "She checked the clock. Another hour wasted on these fools." What best describes the final sentence?

    • A narrator's neutral measurement of elapsed time
    • Ada's judgement entering narration without a thought tag
    • Ada's direct speech addressed to the waiting group
  3. Third-person narration can move from a broad description toward a character's immediate thoughts without changing narrator.

    Circle one:   True   False

  4. "At dusk, the square emptied. Lila gripped her application. Another rejection tomorrow, no doubt." The scene follows anxious Lila. How does narrative distance change?

    • It pulls away from Lila toward a wider account of the town.
    • It moves from a broad view toward Lila's anxious expectation.
    • It stays with external actions without approaching her response.
  5. Ivo earlier called his neighbor "that fool." A scene follows Ivo: "Another visit from that fool. Hadn't he suffered enough?" Whose judgement do these clues support?

    • The neighbor's judgement, reported through his own speech
    • A neutral assessment established by the neighbor's actions
    • Ivo's judgement, echoed through the narrative wording
  6. After Liv complains about her neighbors, the narration says, "The street was empty. All the decent people had gone." Which distinction is supported?

    • Both empty and decent describe directly observable conditions.
    • Empty evaluates the residents; decent measures their presence.
    • Empty reports a condition; decent expresses a value judgement.
  7. Sera waits for her brother's train. He has not arrived. The scene follows her: "Of course he forgot her. Nobody cared." Later, she learns his train was delayed. What can the untagged judgement do?

    • Convey Sera's hurt while leaving her conclusion open to doubt.
    • Confirm that her brother deliberately chose not to visit her.
    • Replace the third-person narrator with Sera speaking aloud.
  8. A student says every free indirect sentence must belong entirely to either narrator or character. Which correction fits?

    • Assign each whole sentence to whoever supplies its pronouns.
    • A narrator's grammatical frame can carry a character's evaluation.
    • Treat every untagged judgement as the narrator's own opinion.
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  1. The pronouns he and him · He and him are third-person pronouns. The question and absent thought tag concern other features; they do not establish grammatical person.
  2. Ada's judgement entering narration without a thought tag · Wasted and fools fit Ada's established resentment. Her evaluation enters without a thought tag; it is not a neutral measurement or stated speech.
  3. True · Narrative distance can change while the narrator and grammatical person remain the same.
  4. It moves from a broad view toward Lila's anxious expectation. · The focus narrows from the square to Lila and her expectation. The final judgement is not established as a fact about tomorrow.
  5. Ivo's judgement, echoed through the narrative wording · The repeated phrase and Ivo-centered complaint support attributing the judgement to Ivo. The insult itself is not an objective fact.
  6. Empty reports a condition; decent expresses a value judgement. · An empty street is an observable condition. Decent evaluates people. Liv's complaint helps with attribution but does not turn the evaluation into a measured fact.
  7. Convey Sera's hurt while leaving her conclusion open to doubt. · The wording can bring readers close to Sera's hurt. The delay offers another explanation for his absence, but does not prove whether he remembered her.
  8. A narrator's grammatical frame can carry a character's evaluation. · Grammatical frame and evaluative wording can have different contributions. Analysis need not force the sentence into one exclusive category.
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