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Connecting your paragraphs from start to finish

English · Writing Composition · ages 11-14
Name ______________________   Date ____________
  1. Which phrase would best open a new paragraph that jumps forward in time?

    • However,
    • The next morning,
    • In addition,
  2. Which word most naturally shows that a result follows from what was just said?

    • Meanwhile
    • As a result
    • For example
  3. A paragraph break by itself can never signal a shift in time or setting. Only words like 'later' can do that.

    Circle one:   True   False

  4. A story paragraph ends with a character boarding a train. The next paragraph should show her arriving in a new city an hour later. Which opening links the paragraphs best?

    • An hour later, the train arrived.
    • Nevertheless, the train pulled into the station.
    • For example, the train pulled into the station.
  5. A paragraph explains that homework helps students practice. The next paragraph will explain a downside. Which connective best opens the new paragraph?

    • Nevertheless,
    • Consequently,
    • For instance,
  6. Paragraph 1 argues that school uniforms save families money. Which topic sentence best links paragraph 2 back to that idea while adding something new?

    • Uniforms also make mornings less stressful for parents.
    • Saving money is one benefit of uniforms, and they also make mornings less stressful for parents.
    • Parents often complain about school mornings.
  7. In a story, paragraph 4 ends in a forest. Paragraph 5 needs to show a different character in a city apartment at the same moment. Which opening best signals this shift?

    • As a result, Priya was locking her apartment door.
    • In addition, Priya was locking her apartment door.
    • Meanwhile, Priya locked her door across town.
  8. A student's essay begins every body paragraph with 'Also,' followed by a new fact, without ever referring back to the paragraph before it. What is the main problem?

    • The paragraph never refers back to the previous idea, so the two paragraphs feel disconnected
    • The essay has too many paragraphs
    • The word 'also' is spelled incorrectly
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Connecting your paragraphs from start to finish W1-mt_tn1rY9GbEZ-s1

  1. The next morning, · 'The next morning' signals a shift forward in time to start the new paragraph.
  2. As a result · 'As a result' signals that a result follows the idea before it.
  3. False · A paragraph break alone can signal a shift, especially when the new paragraph opens with a time or place word.
  4. An hour later, the train arrived. · 'An hour later' carries the story forward in time and connects the two scenes.
  5. Nevertheless, · 'Nevertheless' signals that the new paragraph will push back against the idea just given.
  6. Saving money is one benefit of uniforms, and they also make mornings less stressful for parents. · This sentence refers back to the money point before adding the new idea about mornings, tying the two paragraphs together.
  7. Meanwhile, Priya locked her door across town. · 'Meanwhile, across town' signals a shift to a different place happening at the same time.
  8. The paragraph never refers back to the previous idea, so the two paragraphs feel disconnected · A strong paragraph link refers back to what came before instead of just adding another fact.
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