Precision and Economy
Say more in fewer words: choose the exact verb and noun, drop intensifiers doing no work, and cut any phrase whose removal costs nothing.
What a learner can do afterwards
- Replace a weak verb plus adverb with one exact verb when the replacement preserves the intended meaning
- Try cutting about a tenth of a draft's words, restoring any wording needed to preserve meaning
- Catch vague nouns (thing, aspect, situation) and name what is actually meant
1 · Read
You have practised choosing sentences for an effect. Precision now means choosing words that match your intended meaning. Economy means removing unnecessary wording. A specific word helps only when its details are supported. Calling an unnamed container a glass jar adds information about its shape and material. Use those details only if you know or intend them.
Consider 'The sealed envelope lay on the desk.' The word 'sealed' tells readers about the envelope's condition. Removing it leaves the envelope and desk but loses that condition. Keep a modifier when its information matters. A longer sentence can be the better choice when the shorter version leaves out something needed.
Try an exact verb in place of a verb and adverb, then compare meanings. 'Whispered' names speaking in a whisper. But 'trudged' can add effort to 'walked slowly'. Use it only if that effort is intended. Adverbs can carry needed information too: 'smiled sadly' says more than 'smiled'. There is no rule that every verb-adverb pair must become one word.
If a noun's reference is unclear, identify what it means before replacing it. Use your notes to name the object or problem. Do not invent a specific name when the information is missing. 'Thing' and 'situation' can work when readers already know their reference. Adding 'very' to 'the situation was bad' still does not name the problem.
Try a rough ten-percent cut as an exercise, not a quota. Remove repeated meaning, then compare drafts. Keep needed actions, details, timing, degree, uncertainty, source credits and tone. Restore any that disappear. 'May finish today' must not become 'will finish today' without support. Check action order too: doing one action before another differs from doing both at once.
Choose words that fit the intended meaning. Cut needless repetition, clarify references using known information, and compare drafts before accepting changes.
Original lesson, practice questions and flashcards about precise, meaning-preserving revision, written for this dataset.
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Compare what a cut changes
A word count tells you how much shorter a draft became. It does not tell you whether the message survived.
Take this invented sentence: 'The visitors waited for a period of five minutes before entering.' Replacing 'for a period of five minutes' with 'for five minutes' keeps the duration and removes empty phrasing. Deleting the duration would make a different change.
Check qualifications as carefully as names and numbers. 'The path is usually open' does not mean the same as 'The path is open'. The word 'usually' limits the claim. A shorter version that removes it may mislead readers.
More specific verbs also need checking. 'Rushed' adds speed or haste that 'moved' does not state. Use it when that meaning belongs in the scene, not merely because it sounds more vivid.
Review the drafts side by side. Compare who acted, what happened, when it happened and any uncertainty or limits. Keep needed source credits and tone. Restore missing meaning before deciding whether the shorter version works.
2 · Watch
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