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Revising and editing

Proof-read own writing to check for errors in spelling, grammar, and punctuation; evaluate and revise writing with teacher/peer support, re-reading to ensure meaning is clear and tense is consistent

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What a learner can do afterwards

  • Re-read own writing and spot a missing full stop or capital letter
  • Identify and correct a tense inconsistency in a piece of writing
  • Discuss improvements with a partner and make at least one revision to strengthen the writing

The lesson

When you finish a piece of writing, you are not quite done yet. Revising and editing means reading your writing again to check it makes sense, and fixing any mistakes you find.

Try it together

Zara wrote this sentence: 'yesterday i go to the park.' She reads it again and spots two mistakes. She adds a capital letter to 'I', and she changes 'go' to 'went' so the whole sentence talks about the past. Now it reads: 'Yesterday I went to the park.'

thedogranfast
Every sentence starts with a capital letter, so 'the' should really be 'The'.
Good to know

When you check your writing, read it out loud, one sentence at a time. Check one thing at a time too: first spelling, then punctuation like full stops and capital letters, then whether all the tense words match. Asking a partner to read it can help you spot things you missed.

Read your writing again, fix the mistakes you find, and ask a partner to help you make it even better.

Watch it

Where it sits

Where this leads

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Then practise

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Revising and editing · English, ages 6 to 7 · LightMySky